You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

letter to share my experience when I stayed at your hotel New Era on

23rd

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the 23rd

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last

month and I had faced a serious issue regarding

check in

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services. At the onset, I

have

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booked my room from

Goibibo

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the Goibibo

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websites

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website

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for two days with

early

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an early

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check-in option;

however

, on

check-in

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the check-in

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date, 23rd of

last

month, there was no record of my arrival in your system and

receptionist

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the receptionist

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told me one more issue of internet connectivity error. I was so

disappinted

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disappointed

due to

such

service by your

renowed

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renowned

renewed

hotel which was never

aniticipated

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anticipated

by me. I was so tired from my train journey and I had to wait for more than two hours in

waiting

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the waiting

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area. But, honestly,

Ms.

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Reva, your receptionist of C1 helped me a lot as she rang up

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the online booking site and entered my data manually in the

log book

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logbook

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by taking

booking

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my booking

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number, ID proof and other declaration

certification

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certifications

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from me. She assisted me to fill three essential papers so as to decrease my botheration.

Lastly

, I would like to suggest you

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have one more backup internet plan so that customers will not face

such

issue

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issues

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again.

Moreover

, if it is possible to appoint a person to deal with online booking customers and their problems to

comminicate

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communicate

directly to these websites, it will certainly increase the efficiency of your services and goodwill among customers. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Harry

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

248 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer the work call and home call at any place, or 7 days a week. Do you think there are more negative or positive effects on both individuals and society?

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?