You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

letter to share my experience when I stayed at your hotel New Era on

23rd

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the 23rd

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last

month and I had faced a serious issue regarding

check in

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services. At the onset, I

have

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booked my room from

Goibibo

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the Goibibo

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websites

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website

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for two days with

early

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an early

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check-in option;

however

, on

check-in

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the check-in

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date, 23rd of

last

month, there was no record of my arrival in your system and

receptionist

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the receptionist

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told me one more issue of internet connectivity error. I was so

disappinted

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disappointed

due to

such

service by your

renowed

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renowned

renewed

hotel which was never

aniticipated

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anticipated

by me. I was so tired from my train journey and I had to wait for more than two hours in

waiting

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area. But, honestly,

Ms.

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Reva, your receptionist of C1 helped me a lot as she rang up

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the online booking site and entered my data manually in the

log book

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by taking

booking

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my booking

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number, ID proof and other declaration

certification

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certifications

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from me. She assisted me to fill three essential papers so as to decrease my botheration.

Lastly

, I would like to suggest you

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have one more backup internet plan so that customers will not face

such

issue

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issues

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again.

Moreover

, if it is possible to appoint a person to deal with online booking customers and their problems to

comminicate

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communicate

directly to these websites, it will certainly increase the efficiency of your services and goodwill among customers. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours faithfully, Harry

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thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

248 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – Describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some believe that children should be taught from a young age how to handle money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People are wearing western-style clothes rather than more traditional clothes. Why is this? Is it a negative or positive development?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the past,when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?