More and more people are working from home rather than at the workforce. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we are facing the covid-19 pandemic in the world. Because of the coronavirus pandemic every country
also
implementing a strict lockdown. Additionally
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people
to work
from home
where some communities happily accept to do
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home
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not.
I think some Fix the agreement mistake
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people
like that because they will have time for family. Additionally
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people
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to work
home
might be facing problems like mental and family issues. At the moment many people
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. It has allowed Fix the agreement mistake
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people
to work
at any time or watch television and chill with friends. As a result
, a person feels comfortable and becomes more concentrated on his responsibilities.
In conclusion, however
arguments above in support of each opinion, we can see there are many advantages and disadvantages of being employed from home
and I want to say that it must be decided by everybody which way of employment to choose.Submitted by nagendranp1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite