Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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status,

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activities at the

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are crucial for

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some

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will discuss both these views and give my opinion.

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with, many

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are not happy with their bosses at the

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of interviews because they received

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from

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their private life .

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ask her , do you have a child ?and she has a toddler and because of

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she was not qualified for that

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really

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, other

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are comfortable and happy by asking

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like their marriage life and their interests and many

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were successful pass their interviews because they pass personal requirements.

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months back

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applied

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hotel as a bakery chef

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say

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only do baking in my free

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meanwhile other says that they listen to songs so only

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pass their speaking test and im one of them .

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personal

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requirement

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depends on applicants if they are comfortable or not regarding their

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about their

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personal

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asking private

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about you is crucial for you because after that they know

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whether you are qualified for that

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or not.