In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Industries
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and businesses are being encouraged to reallocate to local areas by governments in some parts of the world. While
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trend has some positive points, namely reducing pollution and traffic congestion in urban
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, it has some drawbacks. The
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advantage is that
cities
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will suffer from less air pollution. If factories, which produce enormous amounts of toxic gases
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as sulfur, methane and carbon dioxide,
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out of the
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, their fumes will not be released
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the atmosphere above urban areas. Another positive point is reducing traffic congestion in towns
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since many people who
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in companies and
industries
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will not need to move around the
cities
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and they will commute from the ring road.
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moving business and
industries
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out of
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will make people spend too much
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getting to
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. They will be far from their homes and they are going to waste a long
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on the way to get to industrial areas.
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, the destination may cause some problems for people who
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there.
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, if they are injured, medical facilities and hospitals are not going to be available for them and it takes a long
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to get to the hospital in the
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there are lots of benefits to
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the businesses and
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out of the
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but it is important to notice the negative aspects like wasting
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and the destination.
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