In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Industries
and businesses are being encouraged to reallocate to local areas by governments in some parts of the world. While this
trend has some positive points, namely reducing pollution and traffic congestion in urban centers
, it has some drawbacks.
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first
advantage is that cities
will suffer from less air pollution. If factories, which produce enormous amounts of toxic gases such
as sulfur, methane and carbon dioxide, work
out of the cities
, their fumes will not be released to
the atmosphere above urban areas. Another positive point is reducing traffic congestion in townsChange preposition
into
,
since many people who Remove the comma
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work
in companies and industries
will not need to move around the cities
and they will commute from the ring road.
On the other
hand
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industries
out of cities
will make people spend too much time
getting to work
. They will be far from their homes and they are going to waste a long time
on the way to get to industrial areas. Furthermore
, the destination may cause some problems for people who work
there. For example
, if they are injured, medical facilities and hospitals are not going to be available for them and it takes a long time
to get to the hospital in the cities
.
Finally
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move
the businesses and Change the verb form
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industries
out of the cities
but it is important to notice the negative aspects like wasting time
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