Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
This
chart illustrates the consumption habits in five Australian cities. The cities that are represented we're Melbourne, Adelaide, Sydney, Brisbane, and Hobart.
First
of all, in the last
4 weeks, most of the residents in each city prefer to go to a cafe for coffee
or tea. The percentages are Sydney 60%, Melbourne 63%, Brisbane 55%, and lastly
, Hobart 63%, beside
Replace the word
besides
from
Adelaide where instant Change preposition
apply
coffee
was slightly more popular. In addition
, The second
most popular habit is an
instant Correct article usage
apply
coffee
where is ranged between 45 to 53 Fix the agreement mistake
percent
percents
. Correct your spelling
per cent
Finally
, the least popular habit is fresh coffee
, the average of a
fresh Correct article usage
apply
coffee
bought by residents was around 35 to 40% where
in some cities Correct word choice
whereas
such
as Adelaide and Brisbane the number has dropped below 35 percent
.
In conclusion, we have seen from the graph that the most popular Change the spelling
per cent
coffee
and tea habit is from a cafe followed by instant coffee
. This
might show us that people are now prefer
the habits that are more Change the verb form
now prefer
convenience
.Replace the word
convenient
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