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• Some people think that teachers’ duties are not confined in academic subjects only, but social values, too, should be part of tier duties.

#people #teachers’ #duties #subjects #values #part #tier
many arguments about whether schoolteacher's duties are just limited in the learning process or they have to contribute
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 helping
students
about
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 their social life
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 are on the stage. As far as I am concerned,
tutors
 shouldn't confine their
role
 just
in
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 teaching academic subjects only, as they could play
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 significant
role
 in improving their social aspects.
First
, no one would argue that, nowadays,
students
 spend much of their
time
 with
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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. Unlike
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 19th century,
students
 now spend much of their childhood and adolescence life in
schools
, and these periods are
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time
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times
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 to learn
valubale
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valuable
 social manners.
Hence
,
tutors
 should allocate a significant amount of their
time
 in order to teach juveniles
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social values.
Second
,
students
, especially junior
students
, feel that teachers are their
role-models
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.
Students
 usually tend to obey
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their tutor's
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advice
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
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,
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 and behave the way their teachers act
infront
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in front
 of them.
For instance
, a study has been conducted about the effect of schoolteachers on the moral values of children, and it shows that children who regularly get advice from their
tutors
,
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become more considerate and respectful than other
students
.
Moreover
, many people support the view that
school
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schools
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 are not just
centre
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 of learning but it is
also
 a place to develop valuable social skills. To show an example, many people
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 that they
first
 made their friendship at
schools
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school
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, and they made
first
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 social experience at school.
Thus
,
tutors
 should consider their
role
 as an intermediate
role
 between different
students
 and they should be the pioneer of
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healthy social interactions for the new generations at
schools
. To sum up, in my opinion, schoolteachers should try to involve in helping Young
students
 with developed social values, that's because, in
this
 days and age,
students
 spend plenty of
time
 at school, they consider their teachers as their
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 and children's
first
 experience with social interactions are in their
schools
.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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