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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching student to judge right and wrong and to behave well. Some say that teacher should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The line graph illustrates the
number
 of
hours
 spent by a person in various types of media from 1990 to 2005. Overall, it appears that an individual spends the maximum hour of their time on television followed by the internet, radio & printed material stand below. In the early 1990s, television played a big role in every household as a source of information and entertainment, which is one reason why the
hours
 spent watching T.V peaked the highest at 25
hours
.
However
, between 1995 to 2000 the
number
 of
hours
 gradually decreased up to 16
hours
 per week.
On the other hand
, the internet wasn’t common media or well known in households,
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 year 2000 internet has become the most powerful media in the world and
also
 a quick and flexible medium to access it from anywhere which see a noticeable change there from 0 to 14
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 the end on the period. Meanwhile, the usage of radio and print medium was not on the higher side. Even though radio was a common device used in every household and because of a very limited
number
 of programs broadcasted, it didn't get very high on usage while it started little below than 5
hours
 in 1990 and remain almost the same till 2000, post that a slight change in
number
 which reach close to 5
hours
. While the print medium was
also
 common at any place and it was easily accessible very few people showed interest reading them all day, which appears in the graph as it started little above than 5
hours
 and there was a quick decrease in the year 1998 and went down to 3
hours
 of usage in the year 2005.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • moral values
  • ethics
  • character development
  • academic knowledge
  • teaching methodologies
  • curriculum
  • critical thinking
  • intellectual growth
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • life skills
  • decision-making
  • behavioral issues
  • conflict resolution
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