The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
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The pie charts
illistruates
the proportion of Correct your spelling
illustrates
illustrate
water
useages
in six areas around the world for various kinds of reasons.
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usages
usage
Overall
, we can say that agricultural
is the main reason Replace the word
agriculture
of
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for
water
useage
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usage
such
as South America
, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
while
wate
is mostly used for industrial in North Correct your spelling
water
America
and Europe. The same pattern applies to domestic use
which is the least reason to spend water
expect
in South Correct your spelling
except
America
where domestic is the second
most common reason.
Firstly
, the water
consume
rate of Replace the word
consumption
agricultural
is the most common purpose in Africa, Central Replace the word
agriculture
Asia
, Sout East Asia
and South America
with 84%, 88%, 81% and 71% of the total consumption respectively. But, the percentages of industrail
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industrial
use
are
fluctuated around 5% to 12% in those countries and the same thing happens to domestic Unnecessary verb
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use
between 7% and 9% despite the fact that 19% for Sout
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South
America
.
However
, the most industralized
places Correct your spelling
industrialized
industrialised
such
as North America
and Europe use
most of their water
for industries which equal
to 48% and 53% each other. The agricultural Add a missing verb
is equal
use
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uses
are
39% and 32% and 13% and 15% for domestic Change the verb form
is
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