The charts below show the percentage of secondary school students at a school in the UK taking different subjects in 1995 and this year.
The table illustrates the amount of cultivated
potato
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potatoes
cabbage
, and onions in five countries in 2012.
Overall
, it is clear that
potato
and Fix the agreement mistake
potatoes
cabbage
made up the biggest proportion in 2012, while
the production of Onion was the list among these vegetables. China was the leader in cultivating them in
that year.
China produced 9214 Change preposition
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Mt
of potatoes in 2012, while
the country in the
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second
place(Ireland) grew only 72Mt
. Brazil and Spain produced the least amount of potatoes, at 3 and 2Mt respectively. The Russians bring up 30 Correct your spelling
72 Mt
Mt
of potato. The Chinese produced 3187 Mt
of cabbage
, while
their Russian counterparts brought up roughly 210Mt
less. The outcome of Spain was 10 Correct your spelling
210 Mt
tomes
more than Correct your spelling
times
Irish
, at 200 and 20 respectively. Brazil was not involved in the production of Correct article usage
the Irish
cabbage
at all.
In terms of onion production, there were three major competitors in the market in 2012. The Chinese brought up 2602 Mt
of it, whereas
Russia and Brazil, at 2039 and 1417Mt
respectively. The Spanish did not cultivate onions in that year. Ireland's cultivation of onion made up 4 Correct your spelling
1417 Mt
Mt
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