You recently went on a trip and thought that the tour guide was particularly helpful. Now you would like to show him/ her your appreciation. Write a letter to the manager of the tour company. In your letter describe the tour explain why you liked the tour guide say what you would like the manager to do to reward the tour guide
Dear Mr Desai,
I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude for the wonderful trip experience to Leh Ladakh; The staff was equally helpful especially Mr John Smith our tour guide.
It was 7 day
6 nights tour starting from the 1st of March. Since it was an educational tour and I was supposed to collect information about the local residents, their lifestyle along with geographical difficulties that face during harsh winter. I found Mr Smith an enthusiastic person with easy to approach. In fact, He has Change to a plural noun
days
also
a good command of the local language and it has helped me a lot in my survey. I must say, he is a valuable asset to the company. Furthermore
, I strongly feel he should be given either a promotion or an increment in the remuneration. It will not only motivate him to keep up the good work but also
his fellow employees.
Once again, thank you very much for the awesome service, I hope you will consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully,
KGSubmitted by Krishna.gandhi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite