You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Mr John Smith, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service received while having lunch on 12th March. My parents came from another city and I have heard a lot about the food

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being served in the restaurant so I decided to celebrate my mother’s birthday here.

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, my experience was pathetic. I placed the order at 1 PM but the food wasn’t served until 1:45 PM.

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, the waiter started to serve the main course without the starter. Apart from

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, Even the bread was so hard to chew for me as well as my other family members. I did complain to the head immediately but he was least bothered to understand my situation; In the end, we paid the bill and left hungry. I am hoping to receive an apology for the trouble and embarrassment I have to go through. I will await a response from your side. Yours faithfully, KG

Submitted by Krishna.gandhi on Sun Jun 05 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

160 words

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungi jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?