you went to the local hospital's emergency department with your young child who had several stomach pains. you had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and while you are were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. write a letter to the registrar complaining about the service you received

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service that we received at the local health care centre. My name is Kristy Smith. After coming from work, My daughter Areeza complained about her unbearable stomach pain. She was not even able to talk or stand on her feet due to pain.

Hence

, without wasting any

further

time,

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decided to take her to the nearest hospital’s emergency ward.

However

, I observed, that no one was interested in attending to my daughter.

Initially

, I kept ignoring the situation as I just wanted the doctors to do needful. But none of them was even not ready to register her case; After waiting for four long hours when I lost my patience, I mentioned filing a complaint with the registrar after that a junior doctor came forward and he started performing tests. I am extremely unhappy with

this

unprofessional behaviour, I would like to file a complaint and in return, I need a written apology and assurance

such

a situation won’t happen again with anyone. Yours Faithfully, KG

Submitted by Krishna.gandhi on Sun Jun 05 2022

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6 paragraphs

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8.00

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