You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter express your interest ask for details of the work that needs to be done let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in connection with your advertisement regarding unpaid work with local children. I am really excited working about work with juveniles as it will help me to gain experience in the related field and succeed in the near future. I love being around youngsters, as they are innocent, imaginative and lovely. I have been teaching the little ones from

this

town through an NGO called ''educate the youths'' for 10 months. To add on, I'm really patient, and friendly and maintain a great relationship with them. I would like to enquire about the working days along with the documents required for

this

job. It would

also

be of great help if you tell me the number of working hours required. At

last

, I would like to share that I will not able to work until March, as I have already been teaching children through an NGO.

However

, from the 1st of April, I am available from Monday to Friday between 7.00 am to 3.00. P.m. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Akila

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

180 words

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