You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: • tell the store where you live & what happened • explain the problem with the laptop • state what action you would like the store to take

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Dear Sir, I, Kuljeet Kaur, resident of Ambala city, a city which is about two hours away from Chandigarh. I am writing to you to express my complaint regarding the laptop which I purchased from your store
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week. It is of the brand Acer and is black in colour having all the recent features on it. It works very well in the
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week.
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I had written a long assignment on it yet in the
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week it did not even switch on. The
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time when I switched on the device, it takes a longer duration to start than usual. After that, there was an error message shown on its screen and
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it shows a black display. I removed the battery and checked it.
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, I put it on charging still it did not respond to any of the above methods. As
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equipment is in warranty so I requested you to lodge a complaint about
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and repair it.
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to it, I
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want you to please arrange for your staff member to collect
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laptop as the city is far away from me and I am unable to visit due to my busy schedule in the office. So, I request you to collect
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laptop on your own. I hope you will consider
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. Thanks, Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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