First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • First impressions
  • Interviews
  • Securing
  • Communication
  • Preparation
  • Research
  • Performance
  • Qualifications
  • Confidence
  • Body language
  • Networking
  • Recommendations
  • Follow-up
  • Technology
  • Social media
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