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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

#restaurant #manager #action
Dear Mr. Andreas, I am your new customer
on
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 your
restaurant
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King
Restaurant
at
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 Sudirman Street which
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the
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 popular street in our hometown. I went to that
restaurant
 with my family and the reason I
decide
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 to choose
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because I
see
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 the review
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the internet
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internet
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 is very
good
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such
 as the staff is polite, and have
wonderful
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 view of
city
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the city
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light
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, so I
bring
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 my family
to
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there to celebrate my birthday.
Unfortunatly
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Unfortunately
, I
am
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 very disappointed with the meal, especially the main course. I
was order
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 the
smoke
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 beef, but the beef
is
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 so hard to chew perhaps it
is does
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 not smoke well, and the
taste
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 so buttery. I wonder if you can manage the chef in
kitchen
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 very well than before. I
wish
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 you can solve the problem
such
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get
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 training
to
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chef
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the chef
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 who
want
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work
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on
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 your
restaurant
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require
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the
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 chef who has experience in cooking, so I hope
this
 problem should not occur again next time. Regards, Marie
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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