You are organising a trip to Paris, France for a group of students from England. Write to the manager of the Youth Hostel Association in Paris. In your letter, explain when you want to visit Paris how long you will stay how many students are in your party, and what accommodation you will require

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am an organiser of a trip, writing
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letter to get your assistance in regards hostel facility for foreign students visiting
paris
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Paris
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from England. We are planning to visit Paris
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this
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fall season to explore
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the beautiful
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sights
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paris
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. We will
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departure
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departure
from England on August 12,2022
Mornining
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9:00 AM IST and arrive on the same day Evening
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:00 PM. Our trip is for 5 nights and 4 days, I guess it should be sufficient to cover all sights and landscapes within 50kms of radius. Including myself we are team of 11 individuals. I am looking for 5 double bed rooms for 10 students, they divide 2 people per room.
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, one individual room for myself.
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, we will need morning breakfast. Please let me know the availibility of rooms as soon as possible! With regards, Rana
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