The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate four destinations of graduates and postgraduates from the UK after leaving university in 2008.In
this
case, people who went into full-time Linking Words
work
after graduation were excluded.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective,the total Linking Words
number
of graduated Use synonyms
students
was almost 10 times higher than that of postgraduates. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
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students’
desire to go for Correct your spelling
students
further
education was the highest destination of the other three choices. Linking Words
On the contrary
, the fewest Linking Words
number
of both of the total Use synonyms
students
kept them as volunteers.
In terms of graduate Use synonyms
students
, almost 30000 Use synonyms
students
did Use synonyms
Linking Words
further
study which was the highest demand of Add an article
a further
four
terms.Correct article usage
the four
In contrast
, only 3500 Linking Words
students
were interested in volunteering after graduating which is the least Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
overall
. The Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
who were involved in part-time Use synonyms
work
and became unemployed was averagely the same, 17735 and 16235 people respectively.
With regard to postgraduates,the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
who did Use synonyms
further
study and part-time Linking Words
work
showed similar numbers ( 2725 and 2535 respectively) which were about 9th times greater than that of voluntary Use synonyms
work
.Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of unemployed postgraduate Use synonyms
students
was 1625.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, moreover, overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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