Many organization and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? What kind of jobs should have a work uniform?

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Since ancient years, people have
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dress code for various events as well as work that survived to these days like the
uniform
that many companies and government jobs ask to use workers. In
this
essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give my own opinion on the matter.
Firstly
, I will explore the positive sides, and
secondly
, I will analyze the negative ones.
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my way of thinking, I support that
uniform
is important in the workplace,
however
, only in every formal job like deputy, lawyer, office workers, and other professions. In fact, the
uniform
helps to develop discipline, helps to get into the atmosphere, and increases the efficiency of employers.
For instance
, each job has
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own dress code and what can you wear and what not.
Also
, some people look impressive in formal clothes and feel more comfortable
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and
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than in casual suits.
On the other hand
, I am against the
uniform
because I think that comfort is
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better and correctly when you work.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • socio-economic disparities
  • professional image
  • brand recognition
  • restrict individual expression
  • customer-facing industries
  • job satisfaction
  • financial burden
  • creativity
  • self-expression
  • identifiable
  • professional appearance
  • sense of belonging
  • corporate identity
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