It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.
Family is the backbone of a person.
Now a days
, we can see that families are getting apart than Correct the word
Nowadays
it
used to be. Correct pronoun usage
they
This
happen
because of Change the verb form
happens
generation
Correct article usage
the generation
gap
and it can be solving
by Change the form of the verb
solved
spent
more and more Wrong verb form
spending
time
all together in the family. The upcoming paragraphs would cast light on above
notion.
The Add an article
the above
an above
First
and the
foremost reason behind Correct article usage
apply
this
problem is generation
Add an article
a generation
the generation
gap
. There is a lot of age gap
between the parents and the children. Because of that, they are having different preferences. For example
, old people like country songs and young
generation like rap songs. Sometimes, it creates a rift between the families. Correct article usage
the young
Next
, most of
the parents have engrossed in their jobs. They do not give proper Change preposition
apply
time
to their children. It develops a communication barrier between them.
On the other hand
, every problem has a solution. Firstly
, people spend some vacations together. To
instance, they plan some holiday trips and spent some quality Change preposition
For
time
together and play games with each other. It develops understanding and a strong relationship between them. Secondly
, if parents busy
Add a missing verb
are busy
in
their work, they use social media to keep maintain their relations properly by chatting online and video calls in their free Change preposition
with
time
.
In conclusion, the conversation gap
is the major problem but if a person balance
their family life and work together, it maintains the peace among families Correct subject-verb agreement
balances
in
Change preposition
apply
the
whole lifeChange the word
their
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