Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to show my disagreement with some of the modifications done to the city bus service
last
month.
Although
it benefits a lot of passengers yet it has certain limitations.
Firstly
, It is clearly mentioned in the guidelines given by the municipal corporation that these buses will operate till 10:00 p.m which causes inconvenience to me as well other travellers who have to travel by bus during that time.
Secondly
, there are not any other modes of transport by which people can reach their destination.
In addition
to it, Fares per kilometres are
also
increased by the government due to which the general public bears a heavy amount.
Furthermore
, the number of stops is
also
decreased by the higher authorities due to which myriad people have to travel by foot to board the bus.
Therefore
, in order to get rid of
this
prevailing situation, it is mandatory that the timings of buses should be changed.
Moreover
, there is a need to reduce the prices so that societies can be served in a better way. I am hoping that you will take into consideration the above-mentioned facts stated by me. Thanks. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.
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