The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.

Both graphs refer to lead the percentages of

men

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and

women

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employments

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employment

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from 1975 till 1995.

Overall

, data shows clearly that

men

are dominating

in

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the field of employment since 1975 and 1995.

However

, the woman

also

did

incredibly

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progress in the given

last

20 years.

according to

the first graph depicts,

men

’s employments rate was higher

for example

in the manufacturing sector preferred

men

’s employees including in the communication sector employee utmost 75% were

men

.

in addition

, finance and banking firms

also

filled with

men

contributions. But more strikingly,

women

appeared to be

competing

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shoulder to shoulder against their male counterparts in communication sectors. Moving up with 1995 data,

women

made significant and impressive progress in retail and public industry. On top of that,

women

outmatched their male counterparts in securing jobs in retail and communications.

Furthermore

, in the communications and retail sectors allowed to half of the percentage were

women

. In the finance industry,

women

are not very far behind their males. In comparison,

last

20 years

men

’s position was stable

whereas

,

women

’s hard work

was

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Flourished

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and gave them better achievement rather than their males.