Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Today’s world is filled with entertainment media and gaming websites, which
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toddlers to stay alone indoors and engage in gaming
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. Some
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might propose
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urging the youngsters to participate in
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performed in groups, while few others might counterargue that these youngsters must be given
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to engage themselves on their own. My opinion
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towards the viewpoint of the latter group. I shall elaborate on both the points and substantiate my grounds in the following paragraphs. Let us commence by looking into some of the benefits of the proposal to
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youth to be a part of group
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, which
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improving interpersonal skills and collaborating with
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of different backgrounds. These merits are,
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the personalities.
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who are of introvert type do not perform well when they are
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of allowing the youth to cultivate the ability to engage on their own appears to be more appealing, as
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solution is not depending on the presence of others. In my opinion,
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must not need other
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to feel engaged and everybody should educate themselves to keep them engaged and happy for the greater good of their life. In conclusion, urging the
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teenagers to get involved in
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performed in groups might not be suitable for all personalities.
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there is a possibility of these
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tending towards wasting
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their valuable time by engaging in gaming and entertainment
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if left alone, it is advisable to give them freedom and help them to cultivate the skills to engage themselves in
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way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • occupied
  • organized
  • group activities
  • benefits
  • social
  • teamwork skills
  • interpersonal skills
  • friendship
  • discipline
  • time management
  • interests
  • hobbies
  • independent play
  • creativity
  • problem-solving skills
  • self-reliance
  • explore
  • discover
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