You live in a room which you share with another student. You have some problems with your roommate. Write a letter to the accomodation officer of the college to change your room. In your letter: *mention the problems you are facing *say how these problems are affecting you *request for a new room

Dear Sir, I, a student of M.Com final year, living in the hostel in
room
no. 23 with another student. I am writing to you in connection with changing of
room
. I am sharing
this
place with a girl who irritates me a lot. She invites her old friends who are living in different rooms and do parties with them. She is not a tidy person and kept the leftover items in the
room
which produced a foul smell. Apart from
this
, she plays loud music. I am concentrating on my studies and working on a presentation for the upcoming exam.
However
, due to the above-mentioned circumstances, I am unable to focus on my goals and it distracts me too much. I
also
talked to her and explain my problem yet she pays no attention to it.
Thus
, It would be really appreciable if you could please shift me to another
room
so that I can attain good grades in examinations. I am hoping that you will take
a
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speedy action on it. Thanks. Yours Sincerely, Kuljeet Kaur.
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