Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factor may have caused this situation and what in your opinion, should be done it.
University
graduates are dreaming to get an occupation in line with their chosen profession. They hope by enrolling in university
will help their professional career in the future. However
, in reality
it is hard for them to meet their professional expectations. In Add a comma
,reality
this
essay, I will describe factors that may lead to this
situation.
Firstly
, it is because of the limited experiences
that they have. Experiences
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others
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other
experiences
such
as organizational, group activities
, and all works related to campus. This
might happen because in
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university
, scholars tend to have their own choice of education courses. Then
, sometimes they choose not to be involved in any other projects or organizations because it might be helpful for them to focus on subject matters only. By doing so, they do not realize that all activities
outside campus give them points plus to add into
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this
situation, it is very crucial for universities to make mandatory program activities
not only about working but also
organizations such
as internship
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internships
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students so that undergraduates must participate actively. Correct word choice
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school they definitely have Correct pronoun usage
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experiences
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experience
in
their resume.
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Secondly
, getting a job for recent graduates is very competitive. It is simply because every year the universities produce workforces and the company available is limited. Hence
, I think it is better for the university
to have some entrepreneur programs offered in order to prepare the sophomore to think not only about having employment but also
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a business
the business
business
to the public. Indeed, it will create a job market for everyone and Fix the agreement mistake
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Finally
, universities need to offer various programs to boost careers for students. Since the graduates lack experience in the working field, they need to prepare for it.Submitted by mamamama on
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