You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the services

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letter to express my appreciation of your nice restaurant with scrumptious foods, as well as, staff services, which keep in mind my birthday celebration in terms of my friends.
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month in June I held on my birthday celebration at your restaurant. Upon arrival, we received a special welcome on behalf of your well behaves employee who showed us you give importance to their customers. We chose a cosy table that
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by beautiful plants and
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pleasant weather.
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, played memorable music in the restaurant's environment with amazing sound effects.
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,I admired your professional menu because there was
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various type of local foods and dessert and we had more choice right
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, there was a little explanation about all foods material so, we were completely aware of our order. Thanks for all kindly attention that make my birthday dreamy. Yours sincerely, Salehi
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