Some individuals are in the support of the increase rate of e-book and decrease in paper books and see is as a growth while others are against it. This essay will demonstrate the advantages and the disadvantages of of the trends.

Some individuals are in support of the increased rate of soft
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seen as
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growth.
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, some
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are against it.
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essay will demonstrate the merits and demerits of
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trend. One of the merits of computer files is that
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society
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able to obtain
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and ideas
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different authors and writers whenever they need them and
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wherever they are. The high rate of
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advancement in the universe today has made resources accessible and affordable to everyone. Virtually everybody
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privileged to use a technological gadget like computers, laptops, tablets and phones.
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has made it portable, handy and easy to operate. Humans have the opportunity to use the internet to browse and get
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they want. For
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a massive impact on the educational system. The youngsters find it easy to do their
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wherever they are because they have an access to the internet where they can get enough details they required.
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researchers, who are
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able to get facts from other people's research work. Looking at the demerits, some Individuals
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that computer files don't encourage reading. The fact that
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population
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the ability to obtain details at
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an increase in laziness towards reading and
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procrastination among them most especially the young ones.
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, youngsters are always reluctant to visit the Library to read or collect books
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is because they are aware that they can shuffle the internet to get the fact they needed. In conclusion,
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the rise in soft
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and fall in hard
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a result of
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and affordability of soft
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which is a great invention.
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are not satisfied with the invention.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...
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