Although the position of women in society today has improved, there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Do you agree?

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women

can’t be in society and they should stay home and take care of children. It is plain to see these days position of

women

in social life has changed beyond recognition. yet, I completely opine that

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there

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still much discrimination between both genders.

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essay will state some valid evidence for the same. To embark, to advance a convincing theory, I could deal with going out.

First

of all, girls can’t hang out with their friends till midnight. They must come back home before 10.

In addition

to what I have just said, some

women

don’t have permission to work. On top of that, they can’t travel abroad or get married. They should be allowed by their husband or father. Not

last

but not least, on the grounds that some men have made society unsafe,

women

must protect themselves. There

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been

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bad news related to

this

.

For instance

, it was written in a newspaper, that a woman has been raped 3 days ago. In the forthcoming paragraph, I could deal with good changes related to

this

.

Although

there is still sexual discrimination, in

this

new decade, due to the advent of technology and social media, people's

mindset

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have changed. New rules were published for the right of females.

Moreover

, they have more independence.

Also

, it is clear to see females in society more than before. To conclude, all in all, there have been great alter related to

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. But both genders need to have the same rights and opportunities.

This

will take a few years to come true.