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the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of UK citizens in 2004.

#expenditure #three #categories #age #groups #uk #citizens
The bar graph compares the percentages of total spending in Uk in three critical categories in
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 of
age
 from under 30 to over 76 . Overall , it is clear that the people who
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 30
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 least monthly
expent
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between
 61 -more than 76
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 the highest expenditure. At the start , the humans
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age
 between 61 to over 76 had the highest proportion in food , drink , and
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entertainment , just 23 . Regarding the
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restaurant
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and
 hotel , obviously had the smallest amount in citizens' that
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 61-75 , at less than 5 .
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 of humans that
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 31-45 their expend are nearly in all categories which are 13,12 and 8 for food , restaurant, entertainment respectively .
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restaurant
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restaurants
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 and
hotel
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hotels
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 reached a peak in
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 30
group
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, just below 15.
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 who
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 less than 40 stood at 6 , so it in that period reached a low compared the others important kind , around 6.
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