WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am going to study for my marketing bachelor's degree

year from September in London and planning to stay in the college Hall of Residence and I would like to know more about

this

place.

First

of all, I would need a single bedroom with a separate living area and a private bathroom.

In addition

, I am the type of person who needs privacy and silence when I am learning so I prefer to learn alone and need a desk and chair in my room for learning.

Also

, a comfy sofa and tv-screen would be nice but not necessary.

In addition

, I have an allergy to certain products and I usually prepare food for myself due to medical conditions,

thus

I need a self-catering zone to store and cook for myself If you can not provide accommodations with the same options I would appreciate it if you can suggest other options for me. Thank you in advance and looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours faithfully,

Sattor

Correct your spelling

Sattar

Kadirov

Submitted by kadirov.sattor755 on Mon Jul 04 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Hall of Residence
Accommodation requirements
Single room
Quiet environment
Proximity
Special requirements
Disability access
Living conditions
Dietary restrictions
Vegetarian
Vegan
Halal
Kosher
Allergy-sensitive
Alternative arrangements
Meal plan
Prompt response
Introductory sentence
Polite
Effective study
En-suite facilities
Recommendations
Campus facilities
Flexible
Consideration

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