It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and not with a secondary education as they in any case will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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the society from many problems in future

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in their field has many negative effects on the development of the nation,

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their studies in engineering because there is no position to

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after that passing the study

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, the schools and hospitals will not be creating and our children will not go to primary school and the patients will not under treatment and lose their

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of work security for citizens,so ,it is clear for having professional policy makers that freshers must be undertaken of proper

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in primary,secondary and tertiary courses to gaining abilities to tackle

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confliction. In conclusion, governments must become the backbone of

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not enough positions to hiring them is so harmful and must be removed from the mind of people.