"Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion."

Education plays a significant role in securing employment. Of the best ways to get a

job

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, one should have completed a degree, while others are of the view that

experience

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and

skills

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is

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more beneficial. On the one hand, completing

college

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a college

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education will enhance an individual's obtaining a

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in the future.

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is due to the fact that

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presenting a diploma or even a

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degree certificate would considerably increase the chances of getting hired by gigantic companies .

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, applying for

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job

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a job

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requires the submission of

curriculum

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a curriculum

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vitaeor

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a resume, wherein qualifications and certifications are stated

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that piece of paper.

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would

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help an employer decide that the applicant is best suited for the needed position.

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, an employee would land a much

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job

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.

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, some are of the belief that certain

skills

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and

experience

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more important than getting a good

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.

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is because

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experience

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the experience

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will eventually take them

success

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.

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, with the proper amount of expertise in a certain aspect of life, one can see a brighter future.

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, the acquisition of training and

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keen interest to improve particular

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will substantially improve life. Celebrities,

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, have become well-known due to their strategic expertise in their chosen fields.

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of them have not finalized their university education.

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, they have been so adept ,

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improving their

skills

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which

has

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immensely affected their life. In conclusion, it is indeed of great significance to get a rewarding

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by having a diploma.

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, I believe that

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expertise and

experience

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are

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advantageous.