Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Water
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is sold at the market, vending machines, and from the tap of every home.
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, as a form of natural resource, it is argued that
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should not be sold in the free market.
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, opinions arise on legalising the sales of bottled
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. Meanwhile,
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sold in bottles are not directly transferred from the river and involves
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various process of purification which involves the hiring of workers.
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, it is
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true that
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is a basic need and a natural resource that individuals should have access to. Every product has a production chain in which many bodies are involved, and
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includes the production of
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bottles. From the contraction of minerals from nature
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to
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the
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to the factory, undergoing purification, testing,
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and packaging
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, to
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delivering to the hands of customers.
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, it is no doubt that bottled
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comes with a price. If
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water
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can no longer be for sale, companies would shut down, affecting
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of employees involved in the production.
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, banning the sales of bottled
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would create opportunities for black markets to open themselves to demands for bottled
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. Creating a downfall to the economy as well.
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, it is argued that
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is a free resource, and
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a basic need which should not be monetised by a group of companies.
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, considering that there are people around the globe who does not have the access to
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, as it does not have enough fund for the
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to be delivered, it is inhuman for
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essentials to be held back by the lack of money.
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, it is argued that governments have the right to distribute natural resources free of cost to the people in the nation. Ultimately, in order to ensure that access to natural resources is fair for all, the government must provide a specific amount of
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to the citizens, while others can buy extra by keeping the proportion of the
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bottle market going.
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way, it acknowledges the work of the people, whilst delivering the basic needs that can not be hindered by the lack of money.
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