Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Water

is sold at the market, vending machines, and from the tap of every home.

However

, as a form of natural resource, it is argued that

water

should not be sold in the free market.

Instead

, opinions arise on legalising the sales of bottled

water

. Meanwhile,

water

sold in bottles are not directly transferred from the river and involves

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various process of purification which involves the hiring of workers.

On the other hand

, it is

also

true that

water

is a basic need and a natural resource that individuals should have access to. Every product has a production chain in which many bodies are involved, and

this

includes the production of

water

bottles. From the contraction of minerals from nature

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to

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the

water

to the factory, undergoing purification, testing,

packaging

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, to

finally

delivering to the hands of customers.

Therefore

, it is no doubt that bottled

water

comes with a price. If

such

water

can no longer be for sale, companies would shut down, affecting

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of employees involved in the production.

Furthermore

, banning the sales of bottled

water

would create opportunities for black markets to open themselves to demands for bottled

water

. Creating a downfall to the economy as well.

On the contrary

, it is argued that

water

is a free resource, and

also

a basic need which should not be monetised by a group of companies.

Also

, considering that there are people around the globe who does not have the access to

water

, as it does not have enough fund for the

water

to be delivered, it is inhuman for

such

essentials to be held back by the lack of money.

Hence

, it is argued that governments have the right to distribute natural resources free of cost to the people in the nation. Ultimately, in order to ensure that access to natural resources is fair for all, the government must provide a specific amount of

water

to the citizens, while others can buy extra by keeping the proportion of the

water

bottle market going.

This

way, it acknowledges the work of the people, whilst delivering the basic needs that can not be hindered by the lack of money.