You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear sir/madam I hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing

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letter to say about my problem when I try to stay at your hotel and the receptionist was very helpful, so

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I should say thank you for your help and I am fully fascinated by your stuff behaviour for helping me. In fact,if your staff do not that I could not find my passport so my holiday was ruined and if I want to talk about that event, I had been going your hotel at the weekend the

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month and when I arrived I realise loos my passport and I am extremely depressed until your employers help me and find that and I do not remember your receptionist really attempt to introduce the different place of a hotel for research mine.

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, I am going to suggest the best ways to prevent the problem from happening again is your gusts lower spend time for taking a room because I think

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mainly results for loos passengers tools and equipment and I used to loos my material but that day I understand your place have a camera of entirely useful. Yours Faithfully, Saeed Foroughi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

197 words

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You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Some employees want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

Some businesses find that new employees who just finished their education lack basic interpersonal abilities such as working with other employees as a team. what do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.