The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the figure for employment in the full-time
UK
in 1998 and 2012. It is clear from the information provided that the majority of people
in the UK
worked in a full-time job
in both years, the male was much greater than female.
In 1988, men in full-time jobs accounted for 53% with over 12 thousand people
which was by far the highest of all. Although
the number of it
in 2012Correct pronoun usage
them
slight
increased the proportion in the Change the word
slightly
UK
experienced a decrease to 47%. By contrast
, females inAdd an article
the
a
job
has
significantly risen to just over one quarter from 1998 to 2012, and the Change the verb form
have
amount
of workers increased by over three thousand Change the quantifier
number
people
.
Turning to the remaining items, the figure for both gender in the part-time job
was not changed a lot. The percentage of women working in part-time jobs decreased by 2% but the total number climbed to almost 6 thousand people
. Men in the part-time job
were the last
group of all in the UK
from 1988 to 2012 with 6% and 7% respectively.Submitted by patrick880613 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, people, job with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
