Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think that children will find it difficult. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many households are migrating to foreign countries to have a good work-life balance.

Consequently

, it has been debatable that some people accept

this

is good for

children

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life,

however

, others think that it makes

children

to

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(

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) have

difficulties

. In my opinion, I believe that

children

can get benefits because

of

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(

x

) their families are moving

to

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abroad.

To begin

with , there are people who take the view that the

children

will get

difficulties

because their families move

to

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(

x

) overseas. The most convincing reason for believing

this

is that

children

need to struggle to adapt to new places without having their playmates. A particularly good example here is that

children

will not be happy if they go to school as they don’t have friends and they might have language barriers in making new friends if their

first

language is not the same as the migrated country’s language.

Moreover

, they will have

difficulties

getting

new

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neighbouring

friend

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to play with after school.

On the other hand

, I am of the view that

this

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more improve

children

’s lives rather than making

difficulties

. The main reason for believing

this

is that they can learn valuable education in abord country that they move.

For instance

, most of the (

x

) families used to migrate to a developed country

such

as the USA for their

children

to get a better education.

In addition

, the

children

are able to learn

different

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kind

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of subjects that they want to learn in those countries. A

further

reason I hold to

this

view is that

children

are able to get a better life and they can improve their living standard when they grow up. To sum up,

although

both arguments have their own merits, I believe moving

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(

x

) overseas is a good way to get a better education for the

children

and have a work-life balance for parents.