Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think that children will find it difficult. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many households are migrating to foreign countries to have a good work-life balance.

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, it has been debatable that some people accept

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is good for

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life,

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, others think that it makes

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to

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. In my opinion, I believe that

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can get benefits because

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) their families are moving

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abroad.

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with , there are people who take the view that the

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will get

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because their families move

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) overseas. The most convincing reason for believing

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is that

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need to struggle to adapt to new places without having their playmates. A particularly good example here is that

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will not be happy if they go to school as they don’t have friends and they might have language barriers in making new friends if their

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language is not the same as the migrated country’s language.

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, they will have

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getting

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neighbouring

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to play with after school.

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, I am of the view that

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more improve

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’s lives rather than making

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. The main reason for believing

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is that they can learn valuable education in abord country that they move.

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, most of the (

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) families used to migrate to a developed country

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as the USA for their

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to get a better education.

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, the

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are able to learn

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of subjects that they want to learn in those countries. A

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reason I hold to

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view is that

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are able to get a better life and they can improve their living standard when they grow up. To sum up,

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both arguments have their own merits, I believe moving

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) overseas is a good way to get a better education for the

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and have a work-life balance for parents.