Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

It is argued that usage and purchase of hard

drugs

namely heroin and cocaine

is

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banned by the institution but it allows people to purchase

tobacco

and

alcohol

which are

also

hard

drugs

, these too should be banned from selling.

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essay agrees with the statement because

the

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hard

drugs

such

as

tobacco

and

alcohol

not only

causes

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health hazards but

also

create addiction

towards

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them.

Firstly

,

tobacco

and

alcohol

is

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injurious to health. Ingredients which

causes

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cause

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cancer

are present in them.

Cancer

is a life

threating

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threatening

disease. Humans are exposed

intense

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radiations

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radiation

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as part of the chemotherapy treatment due to which

huge

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number of side problems occur. The disease can be treated if it is identified in an early stage or else it might lead to the death of the patient.

For instance

, one of my

friends

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father smokes a cigarette packet daily which caused him mouth

cancer

due to which he had expired

Secondly

,

tobacco

and

alcohol

is

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very addictive. People cannot control their urge to consume them which leads to lifestyle disorders and financial

crisis

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. There are instances where due to

alcohol

or

tobacco

addiction,

livelihood

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of a person has been destroyed and caused severe issues in their family relationships. To illustrate, poor people who fall under the habits of consumption of

alcohol

regularly give much importance to drinking rather than providing the basic needs

to

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their families In conclusion,

government

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the government

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should implement laws of prohibition of

sale

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the sale

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of all hard

drugs

namely heroin, cocaine,

alcohol

and

tobacco

in a similar manner as all of them are

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cancer-causing

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cancer causing

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cancer-causing

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and very addictive which extremely

interferes

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in

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with

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humans' well being