Alternative energy source that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

It is frequently believed that

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the

production

of green

energy

such

as

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solar power wind power and wave power is unaffordable and complex. While the traditional

energy

sources like oil, gas and coal

is

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cheaper for city and

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transportation

transportaion

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transportation

purpose. I disagree with

this

belief. In

this

essay, I will explain

the

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green

energy

is more productive and harmless

for

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earth

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. Climate change is a huge problem, which is not limited

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a group of

region

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regions

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or countries. It affects each and every part of the globe.

Reasercher

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Researchers

Researcher

had proved that excessive usage of natural

energy

sources namely oil, gas,

coal

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results in global warming.

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picture can

be

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change

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by replacing them with green

energy

. The

production

cost of alternative

energy

is an issue. To protect mother nature is more important than the economics of the country. As the technology is getting advanced every day the expenses of alternate

energy

can be reduced.

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, 20 years ago

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a phone or television set was not

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budget-friendly

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budget friendly

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for

every one

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, but now it is common to have

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a smart

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smart phone

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and

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flat-screen

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flat

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screen television in each home. Rather than funding the unnecessary space program, if

government

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the government

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will spend money on safer

energy

production

, it will help the reduction of pollution.

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Instead

Instaed

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Instead

of saving money we all should concentrate on saving natural wealth

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so that our

next

generations can experience the real beauty of nature. In conclusion, by developing

a better equipment

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for green

energy

production

we can

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replace

place

rplace

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place

the traditional

energy

sources for

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vehicles

vehicals

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vehicles

and cities

in

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better

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cost.