In school and universities, girls tend to chose arts while boys like science. What are the reason of this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

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Schools and universities offer a variety of courses to the students. According, to the

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girls

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are inclined towards choosing arts while

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science

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for

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trend and my opinion regarding

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phenomenon. Choosing arts by

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and

science

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boys

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may have many

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and I don't completely agree with the

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rather the

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must have been more

girls

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choose art rather than generalising. I have seen many

girls

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as doctors or in the other dominions in the fraternity of

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. But as of now, let's see the

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behind

girls

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choosing art. one of the

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may be because women naturally are inclined towards arts, crafts, cooking and beautification kind of things. And, another reason may be because it will take quite a time to get settled professionally in the field of

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Boys

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by their innate nature are more inclined toward

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from their childhood.

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girls

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during childhood pretend play and

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are more interested in the mechanics of a toy. In my ,opinion

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tendency need not be changed because it is their personal choice and it is according to their taste. If the student chooses

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his/her free will it need not be changed

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But, the sad part is sometimes

girls

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choose the courses according to their parent's

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because of their financial ability and they want

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to settle down faster.

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is what I disagree with and

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, Yes, the trend should be changed. In conclusion, though I don't agree with the

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totally, the picking of courses by

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and

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need not be changed if it is their personal choice and until they are under some pressure.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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287 words

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In school and universities, girls tend to chose arts while boys like science. What are the reason of this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

Fully explain your ideas

In most countries around the world, children begin learning the English language at school from the primary level. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teaching the English language to children at an early age?

Some people say that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

A large income is much more important than being satisfied at work. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.