You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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I am Supun Kularatne, a regular customer at your Cold

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restaurant

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. I am writing to complain about a meal I enjoyed with my family at your

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a few days ago. On the 5th of July, I went to the Cold

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restaurant

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with my family to celebrate my graduation. I ordered two portions of cold

street

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special rice, one portion of Biriyani for our main course, for the desserts four cups of fruit salads mixed with ice cream. The service of that particular day was so unpleasant, that it took almost two and half hours to sever what we ordered. Not only that, we experienced a bad taste of the food. The chicken which was in both Cold

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special and Biriyani was half cooked,

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the fruit salad was served, and it had no ice cream. Immediately complained about

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, to your

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your sales representative who at the

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at that moment. In reply, he said he had not enough staff to complete the orders. I felt so furious but I did tell anything to him

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and left the place with my family with a heart full of sorrow. Prior to

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day, I had no memory of happening

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things. All I had, lovely memories of tasting good food with kind service. I want you to take action, regarding what happened on that day, and if you take

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please share with me, what are you going to do in order to prevent

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things from happening in the future. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Supun

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

265 words

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

The Greeting

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most important education for students should be conducted in classroom，not out of the classroom.

Many people realize that people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of lives than people born in earlier centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?