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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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I am Supun Kularatne, a regular customer at your Cold
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. I am writing to complain about a meal I enjoyed with my family at your
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 a few days ago. On the 5th of July, I went to the Cold
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restaurant
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 with my family to celebrate my graduation. I ordered two portions of cold
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 special rice, one portion of Biriyani for our main course, for the desserts four cups of fruit salads mixed with ice cream. The service of that particular day was so unpleasant, that it took almost two and half hours to sever what we ordered. Not only that, we experienced a bad taste of the food. The chicken which was in both Cold
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 special and Biriyani was half cooked,
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 the fruit salad was served, and it had no ice cream. Immediately complained about
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, to your
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 your sales representative who at the
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 at that moment. In reply, he said he had not enough staff to complete the orders. I felt so furious but I did tell anything to him
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 and left the place with my family with a heart full of sorrow. Prior to
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 day, I had no memory of happening
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 things. All I had, lovely memories of tasting good food with kind service. I want you to take action, regarding what happened on that day, and if you take
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 please share with me, what are you going to do in order to prevent
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 things from happening in the future. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Supun
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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