The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.
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The bar charts illustrate information about four various destinations of
graduate
and post
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postgraduate
graduate
students
of the UK after completing their college in the year 2008 .those who started full-time education.
Overall
it is clearly evident both UK graduate
and postgraduate students
had a similar destination after leaving college as the figures show the majority went for further
study and the least number
of them chorused for voluntary works.
It is obvious that about 17.735 graduate
students
opted for part-time work which is only 1500 people more than the number
of unemployed graduates about a number
of unemployment graduates about 16.235 students
.likewise
the number
of postgraduates who went on to part-time work and further
study are close to each other with a difference of 190 people on the figures.Submitted by mr.rahimi30 on
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