Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some individuals are of the view that
history
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is paramount in the present education system while others are of the opinion that
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and
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more significant in our
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school system.
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notion.
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, the two different views will be outlined after which a meaningful conclusion will
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be drawn. On one hand,
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and
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have improved
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of communication. With the advent of cell phones, laptops and many more devices, communication is now easy and information around the globe can be easily accessed compared to the ancient days .
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, interacting with loved ones within and outside the country is now easy compared to the past when these devices were not there
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access to recent happenings around the globe is now within reach.
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of culture is one of the main reasons some individuals believe that
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is more important than
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and
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. With the development of our societies, the younger generation should be taught
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lessons in schools so that they will become aware of their past events and cultural heritage.
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,
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will help the children know when Nigeria was created, how she got her independence and
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national
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coat of
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.The national anthem and pledge would have been a thing of the past by now but with
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, children still sing the national anthem in their various places of education. In conclusion, after assessing the two views, it is worthy of note that though studying
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is good and
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our cultural heritage,
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and
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will benefit and improve our lives more. I will
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recommend that the government should build more institutions of
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and
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to encourage the youth .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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