In many part of the world, women study science and technology but do not work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

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a Business Management Diploma Course student. (BM-105) My name is Rose Ng. Student Number : 190875.

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you I will quit the course

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afford

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plenty of time to study while onwards to the career. On

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temporary, I will stop my learning for a while. May I ask whether credits can be

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for my diploma? I absolutely understand I will lose my GPA marks, but

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to continue my study plan

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the future when

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Business Management knowledge, that’s could helpful for my job.

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seminar, in

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student seat. And thank you for your help.

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your assistance

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and

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respond

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from you.

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Sincerely, Rose Ng