The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There is nothing to argue that we can realise the
sales
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of
coffee
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went up in all of 5 countries but bananas only up in 3 out of 5. In general, the
Uk
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is on the top
sales
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in both tables during the period of 1999 to 2004. Speaking the
Fairtrade
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Coffee
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in 1999, Switzerland was
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the top in revenue at 3
million
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,
while
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the
UK
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took first place at 15
million
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for Bananas
Fairtrade
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. 2004 is the year of dramatically increasing
sales
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in the
UK
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both products. Not only that, the
UK
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sales
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of
Fairtrade
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coffee
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were approximately 3 times higher than Switzerland in 2004.
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, the year 2004
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noticed the highest levels of spending in the
UK
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and Switzerland for Bananas
Fairtrade
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with revenue of 32
million
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and 4.5
million
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. It is easily noticed the
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figures for the two products were far lower in Denmark, Belgium, and Sweeden. Slight increases can be seen in that 3 countries in both years with
coffee
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with a small amount at 2
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while
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Belgium and Sweeden fell in Banana approx 1
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, uk, fairtrade, million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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