In recent times, we have been approaching a cashless society
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for citizens and is
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to replacing cash and coins totally. I totally agree with the fact that
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, it is difficult for a few groups in our community to process
digital transactions.
First of all, thanks to the disruptive technology of online banking
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has made it quite easy and secure to use our funds. People are
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and protect
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all the time at home or outside the house.
, internet banking saves a lot of time in busy working schedules, by not
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a person or an authority to exchange payments.
, it saves our in-person shopping hours by providing digital shopping in our
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. A perfect example is our monthly wage
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we receive electronically without our time being wasted by going to the bank with a cheque.
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security in terms of finance.
, there are still a few poor and
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groups in our society who find it hard to understand the functioning of online transfer. The illiterate
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in a country
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a small amount of daily wage
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can not be saved in a bank account, and tend to use notes for their expenses.
, senior citizens who have
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low gasping intellect to understand the system of internet processes face difficulty
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with the trend,
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to use wealth in currency form.
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, my grandfather didn't choose an online system to manage capital because he thought it was a confusing way of transaction.
, it seems that there will be some groups in society that will prefer to do
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exchange rather than online.
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for years, it is being resisted by many folks.
, the developing technology would eradicate
problems and make it even more accessible and suitable for every group in various regions to handle it.