The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts compare and contrast the data of the
differrences
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differences
difference
between the average proportions of three distinctive types of nutrients in typical meals
comsumed
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consumed
in the USA.
Overall
, it is evident from the charts that the percentage of each has a
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difference. In detail, 43% of sodium is digested in
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dinner.,
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by lunch, which accounted for 29%.
In contrast
, snacks and breakfast have a relatively small proportion of total sodium,
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up merely 14% each.
Simlarly
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Similarly
, saturated fat
also
followed
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same pattern as sodium. Dinner and
luch
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lunch
are major meals which consist of the largest percentages of fat, at 37% and 26% respectively.
While
the rest, including breakfast and
snacks
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occupy
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proportion, under 21% each. The opposite is true in
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of added sugar when snacks accounted for the highest proportion of entire sugar, at nearly half or 42%.
While
the others stand for the remaining, under 23% each.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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