The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The charts compare and contrast the data of the
differrences
between the average proportions of three distinctive types of nutrients in typical meals Correct your spelling
differences
difference
comsumed
in the USA. Correct your spelling
consumed
Overall
, it is evident from the charts that the percentage of each has a clearly
difference.
In detail, 43% of sodium is digested in Change the adverb
clear
the
dinner., Correct article usage
apply
following
by lunch, which accounted for 29%. Wrong verb form
followed
In contrast
, snacks and breakfast have a relatively small proportion of total sodium, make
up merely 14% each.
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making
Simlarly
, saturated fat Correct your spelling
Similarly
also
followed a
same pattern as sodium. Dinner and Correct article usage
the
luch
are major meals which consist of the largest percentages of fat, at 37% and 26% respectively. Correct your spelling
lunch
While
the rest, including breakfast and snacks
occupy Add the comma(s)
,snacks
trivial
proportion, under 21% each.
The opposite is true in Correct article usage
a trivial
case
of added sugar when snacks accounted for the highest proportion of entire sugar, at nearly half or 42%. Correct article usage
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the others
stand for the remaining, under 23% each.Submitted by domaianh.uliser on
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