When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

None of us can reject that

money

is one of the factors playing a central role in life. Insufficient finance leads to various difficulties for not only a single individual but

also

his or her family. In view of

this

, there is a controversial opinion that the

salary

is the most notable factor when applying for a

job

. I am unable to deny the truth of

this

statement, but I do not completely agree with it. Aside from

salary

, the working environment is

also

worth our consideration. While

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population is working in order to satisfy their own passions, the majority is struggling with living expenses. In modern society, people have an abundance of costs and bills, which need to be punctually paid.

Therefore

,

money

is extremely virtual and necessary.

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people have a family to feed. Living alone without

money

is an impossible task, let alone taking care of a whole family with a modest

salary

.

On the other hand

, if a

job

-seeker only focuses on how much

money

he or she is going to get for the

job

, but ignores his or her interest, it is unlikely for him or her to get a promotion in the career. When a worker is not really into the task he or she performing, there is neither creativity nor devotion for it. Employees with

such

a work attitude will surely never get exaltation from the manager. There is an undeniable fact that

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working is not only a way to survive in modern society, but

also

a daily activity that every single individual has to engage in as a part of life. Because of that, we should choose an appropriate

job

with a comfortable working environment that we can enjoy, but not a high-paid one with a lot of pressure.

Although

salary

is one of the priorities which should be regarded when someone applies for a

job

, he or she should consider other aspects

such

as work-related pressures, relationships with colleagues and superiors and so on.