With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a certain school of thought who believe that, with the rapid rate of modern life, most individuals are moving towards quick to prepare

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as their actual dish.

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situation after which a feasible conclusion shall be drawn.

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and foremost, less

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needed in preparing the

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is one of the enormous reasons making

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number of people to move

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rapid

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is because, nowadays, most individuals are busy with work activities and other life projects

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that they hardly have

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to prepare for themselves any dish

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time consuming

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. More so , these

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also

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save a lot of money. People do not need

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funds to prepare,

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with the least amount of money, one can

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that they can satisfy themselves .

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it was recently published that about 50% of Ghanaian workers every morning rely on Indomie, as their breakfast as it saves

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and

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affordable. Despite affordability and

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saving, quick

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cannot go without a challenge and one of them is the health problems that it poses. A key factor

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most of these

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contain harmful substances like high sodium and fats which are very detrimental to our health.

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, most of these

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do not contain the needed nutrients in their rightful proportions and so individuals who take it in excess turn to be deficient

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certain nutrients needed for their growth.

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, a recent survey conducted among school children indicates that

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some of the pupils lack vitamin A and B12 which is

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a result of taking indomie and certain canned

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. In conclusion, after assessing the benefits and drawbacks, it is felt that the cons far outweigh the

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recommend that people make

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out of their busy schedules to prepare their own

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