With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a certain school of thought who believe that, with the rapid rate of modern life, most individuals are moving towards quick to prepare

meals

as their actual dish.

This

essay shall outline the merits and demerits of

this

situation after which a feasible conclusion shall be drawn.

First

and foremost, less

time

needed in preparing the

meals

is one of the enormous reasons making

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number of people to move

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rapid

foods

.

This

is because, nowadays, most individuals are busy with work activities and other life projects

such

that they hardly have

time

to prepare for themselves any dish

that is

time consuming

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. More so , these

meals

also

save a lot of money. People do not need

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funds to prepare,

therefore

with the least amount of money, one can

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rest

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that they can satisfy themselves .

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it was recently published that about 50% of Ghanaian workers every morning rely on Indomie, as their breakfast as it saves

time

and

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affordable. Despite affordability and

time

saving, quick

meals

cannot go without a challenge and one of them is the health problems that it poses. A key factor

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this

reason is that

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most of these

foods

contain harmful substances like high sodium and fats which are very detrimental to our health.

Furthermore

, most of these

foods

do not contain the needed nutrients in their rightful proportions and so individuals who take it in excess turn to be deficient

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certain nutrients needed for their growth.

For instance

, a recent survey conducted among school children indicates that

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some of the pupils lack vitamin A and B12 which is

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a result of taking indomie and certain canned

foods

. In conclusion, after assessing the benefits and drawbacks, it is felt that the cons far outweigh the

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. In view of

this

, I will

therefore

recommend that people make

time

out of their busy schedules to prepare their own

meals

.