You have been working as a Manager in a private company for the last two years with no salary raise. Write a letter to your manager to request a pay equity in your salary as compared to other managers in your department. In your letter, explain why you are writing why you think you deserve a salary raise say what you want your manager to do for you

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to express a concern regarding my compensation. It's been more than two years since I do not have any appreciation for my salary despite huge profits and company share values skyrocketing and I am not sure how long should I work without any hike in my pay. I strongly believe that I am the best employee in our project,

In addition

, I am

also

extending my support to other teams as well during their critical situations. Apart from that, the

last

two projects which I developed huge got phenomenal feedback from our clients.

Furthermore

, I have

also

received the best appreciation email from our CEO desk for my immaculate quality work. As you heard, I am not at all happy with my current salary and the benefits which I am getting from our company.

Hence

, I would request you to please have a look into my case immediately and it would be great if you could send a note human resource team on my salary increment. If I did not get any response from the HR team and

then

, I would look at a new opportunity for sure as I cannot work for less package. I look forward to hearing a response from you with good news. I hope it will come soon to make me feel happy. Yours sincerely, Lakshmi.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

227 words

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