You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter express your interest ask for details of the work that needs to be done let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you about the recent advertisement which you posted in the local newspaper, it is regarding a volunteer job with local youngsters. I am an experienced specialist in working with kids, I have worked for a lot of childcare homes in the past and ,
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I am working in the school as a teacher. I love working with kids
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

I am extremely interested in
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

role even though it is going to be unpaid. I would be grateful if you can share with me more details.
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, what will be my key responsibilities and work schedule
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I will be available weekdays from 3 pm till 6 pm, plus I have some spare time on weekends. In general, I would say my schedule is quite flexibly right now. Looking forward to hearing from you back. Yours faithfully,
Sattor
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Sattar

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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